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"Turning" Turning towards the beginning at the tip of the tail end, we push forward through the tunnel screaming through the pain bathed in water and blood, annnointed and slapped rudely awake by the details, in the hand we are shuffled, chords are cut like ties that bind, we are separated from the chaff, we are called by name, numbered and tagged for the game, then the measure of us, weighed and registered, certified in deeds like paper weights, the double majors abruptly change to bugger alls, it’s all about the words spoken and heard another story borne (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 7/3/2023 3:01:00 AM
The Odyssey, First Steps.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/3/2023 3:02:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_odyssey_first_steps_1525962
Date: 7/3/2023 3:01:00 AM
DON'T ignore your BIRTHDAY - it's more important than you thought.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/3/2023 3:02:00 AM
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Date: 7/2/2023 8:59:00 AM
A wonderful write. Life is just a game some play? They play to win at all costs. One day the beginning and the end will meet in the middle. Do they not know God is in control? Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 7/3/2023 3:19:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/communion_1007994
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/2/2023 4:00:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/1/2023 5:08:00 PM
30 minutes of David Lynch listening to birds, smoking and reminiscing on old works and memories...
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Date: 7/1/2023 5:08:00 PM
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Book: Reflection on the Important Things