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Turned Down Heaven

God, having glimpse of my Love, missed heartbeat
was joyous seeing His creation adorning earth
was envious as for heaven such beauty He could not repeat
thought of ending her life on earth to give in heaven a berth
death struck, soul turned down heaven to be soulmate Ghost on earth     


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By Hitendra Mehta

April 2011
For Members Contest - God, ghost & Love by Dr. Ram Mehta
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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/19/2011 5:06:00 AM Congratulations Hitendra on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Manouchka Doreus Date: 4/18/2011 5:04:00 PM i love the way the last line is worded Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/16/2011 5:49:00 PM Great to see you at the top once more Hitendra. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/16/2011 2:10:00 PM Many congrats on your wins : ) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/16/2011 1:14:00 PM Me again! LOL we will push you into the HOT list ;) Easy new bit of info...Titles capitalize all words 4 letters or more! Hugs! [I didn't know this either my Uncle was an ediitor for a magizine he wrote to tell me ;)] Light & Love Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 4/16/2011 7:47:00 AM It's a little too spooky! Nice write, and congrats to you Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/16/2011 4:06:00 AM Super Congrats Hitendra on your big win with this excellent entry.. Gautami Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/15/2011 8:54:00 PM Super fine Hitendra. Warmest congrats for this super win dear. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2011 6:07:00 PM Congratulations on your win,Hitendra, nice to see you tonight on the list! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/15/2011 6:06:00 PM Verycreative, dear Hitendra. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/15/2011 4:14:00 PM Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest ..with this amazing write and entry luv.. enjoy your big win and happy weekend my friend...luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/15/2011 3:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/15/2011 2:47:00 PM Congrad's on your win! Soup Mail Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/15/2011 8:34:00 AM Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, Hitendra Login to Reply

Timothy Brumley Date: 4/14/2011 6:33:00 AM I can relate to this poem Hitendra, I too love with the fullness of my heart, its either all or nothing at all. Perhaps that's why Father has kept me unattached for so long, out of jealousy:) Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/13/2011 12:23:00 PM So many people die young, Hitendra, even babies. I like to think God is calling them home. It eases the grief. This is a wonderful entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/12/2011 11:42:00 PM A very unusual story you came up with, quite interesting! I'm sorry to hear you have not had inspiration for Soup lately. I too am so busy,I can barely keep up anymore. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Date: 4/12/2011 2:51:00 PM Wow Hitendra .Thanks for the congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/12/2011 12:57:00 PM Ahhh sounds like Tara!! Lovely one dear. Light & Love Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 4/12/2011 8:01:00 AM Nice title and ending. Also a very unique perspective. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/11/2011 1:43:00 PM Thanks for the entry, Hitendra. Jai Shri krishna Login to Reply