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Turned Down Heaven

God, having glimpse of my Love, missed heartbeat was joyous seeing His creation adorning earth was envious as for heaven such beauty He could not repeat thought of ending her life on earth to give in heaven a berth death struck, soul turned down heaven to be soulmate Ghost on earth ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By Hitendra Mehta April 2011 For Members Contest - God, ghost & Love by Dr. Ram Mehta ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:06:00 AM

Congratulations Hitendra on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 4/18/2011 5:04:00 PM

i love the way the last line is worded

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 5:49:00 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Hitendra. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 4/16/2011 2:10:00 PM

Many congrats on your wins : )

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/16/2011 1:14:00 PM

Me again! LOL we will push you into the HOT list ;) Easy new bit of info...Titles capitalize all words 4 letters or more! Hugs! [I didn't know this either my Uncle was an ediitor for a magizine he wrote to tell me ;)] Light & Love

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2011 7:47:00 AM

It's a little too spooky! Nice write, and congrats to you

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 4:06:00 AM

Super Congrats Hitendra on your big win with this excellent entry.. Gautami

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/15/2011 8:54:00 PM

Super fine Hitendra. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Hitendra, nice to see you tonight on the list!

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 6:06:00 PM

Verycreative, dear Hitendra. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:14:00 PM

Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest ..with this amazing write and entry luv.. enjoy your big win and happy weekend my friend...luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/15/2011 2:47:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Soup Mail

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, Hitendra

Timothy Brumley

Date: 4/14/2011 6:33:00 AM

I can relate to this poem Hitendra, I too love with the fullness of my heart, its either all or nothing at all. Perhaps that's why Father has kept me unattached for so long, out of jealousy:) Good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2011 12:23:00 PM

So many people die young, Hitendra, even babies. I like to think God is calling them home. It eases the grief. This is a wonderful entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2011 11:42:00 PM

A very unusual story you came up with, quite interesting! I'm sorry to hear you have not had inspiration for Soup lately. I too am so busy,I can barely keep up anymore. Luv, Andrea

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 4/12/2011 2:51:00 PM

Wow Hitendra .Thanks for the congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2011 12:57:00 PM

Ahhh sounds like Tara!! Lovely one dear. Light & Love

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/12/2011 8:01:00 AM

Nice title and ending. Also a very unique perspective. Good luck in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/11/2011 1:43:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Hitendra. Jai Shri krishna