Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Quintain (English)

Turned Down Heaven

God, having glimpse of my Love, missed heartbeat
was joyous seeing His creation adorning earth
was envious as for heaven such beauty He could not repeat
thought of ending her life on earth to give in heaven a berth
death struck, soul turned down heaven to be soulmate Ghost on earth     


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By Hitendra Mehta

April 2011
For Members Contest - God, ghost & Love by Dr. Ram Mehta
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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 5:06 AM Congratulations Hitendra on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

Manouchka Doreus April 18, 2011 at 5:04 PM i love the way the last line is worded

John Freeman April 16, 2011 at 5:49 PM Great to see you at the top once more Hitendra. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne April 16, 2011 at 2:10 PM Many congrats on your wins : )

Debbie Guzzi April 16, 2011 at 1:14 PM Me again! LOL we will push you into the HOT list ;) Easy new bit of info...Titles capitalize all words 4 letters or more! Hugs! [I didn't know this either my Uncle was an ediitor for a magizine he wrote to tell me ;)] Light & Love

Mitch White April 16, 2011 at 7:47 AM It's a little too spooky! Nice write, and congrats to you

Gautami Phookan April 16, 2011 at 4:06 AM Super Congrats Hitendra on your big win with this excellent entry.. Gautami

Tahera Mannan April 15, 2011 at 8:54 PM Super fine Hitendra. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2011 at 6:07 PM Congratulations on your win,Hitendra, nice to see you tonight on the list!

Elaine George April 15, 2011 at 6:06 PM Verycreative, dear Hitendra. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2011 at 4:14 PM Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest ..with this amazing write and entry luv.. enjoy your big win and happy weekend my friend...luv..

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2011 at 3:33 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi April 15, 2011 at 2:47 PM Congrad's on your win! Soup Mail

Dr.Ram Mehta April 15, 2011 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, Hitendra

Timothy Brumley April 14, 2011 at 6:33 AM I can relate to this poem Hitendra, I too love with the fullness of my heart, its either all or nothing at all. Perhaps that's why Father has kept me unattached for so long, out of jealousy:) Good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2011 at 12:23 PM So many people die young, Hitendra, even babies. I like to think God is calling them home. It eases the grief. This is a wonderful entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2011 at 11:42 PM A very unusual story you came up with, quite interesting! I'm sorry to hear you have not had inspiration for Soup lately. I too am so busy,I can barely keep up anymore. Luv, Andrea

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet April 12, 2011 at 2:51 PM Wow Hitendra .Thanks for the congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Debbie Guzzi April 12, 2011 at 12:57 PM Ahhh sounds like Tara!! Lovely one dear. Light & Love

Black Eyed Susan April 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM Nice title and ending. Also a very unique perspective. Good luck in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 11, 2011 at 1:43 PM Thanks for the entry, Hitendra. Jai Shri krishna