Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Turn the Flame To Maximum

I boarded my hot air balloon
And set my sights on high,
I turned the flame to maximum
And headed for the sky.

Below, the land receded
As I joined the mighty blue,
The sky was my ocean,
Heavenwards I flew.

Earthbound things now disappeared
I embraced serenity,
As I sailed the atmosphere
Contentment called on me.

Alone, but not lonely,
Detached, but still aware.
Truly I'd found heaven,
As I drifted in the air.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Heidi Sands May 28, 2018 at 11:53 AM Beautiful! I love the last stanza. Well done Gary :) Gary Smith May 28, 2018 at 12:40 PM Thank you Heidi :)

Joseph P. DiMino May 28, 2018 at 9:47 AM Tempting...I can see the appeal. Well said! Gary Smith May 28, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you Joe :)

Susan Ashley May 26, 2018 at 10:07 PM Gary, your poem is truly divine on many levels. I adore your breathtaking imagery and your beautiful message. Stunning, especially your last stanza. Best for a win! ~Susan Gary Smith May 27, 2018 at 5:23 AM Thank you Susan :)