Turn Around

Turn around on your journey, friend,
    and look back to this hill
    I occupy,
    arms raised...hello? goodbye?
Silhouette on your horizon
    but now the sun is high.

My travellers
    are all strung out
    on dusty roads and highways.
Not surprised, those who 
    know where to find me
    at this extended view.

But you
    in blazing trails across the landscape
    changed the contour of my land.
    No matter now where
    we each choose to stand;
I know your pack, your cap, your cart.
    Look back, my friend;
    at every turn, I recognize
    you still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:27 AM
"we each choose to stand" - "at every turn, I recognize you" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
Mccann Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the mention, Beata; it's so encouraging to hear a response. Thank you also for running the contest. It's really appreciated. EWlizabeth
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