Turbulence

off course arrows blown
shattering glass against stone…
forbidden love known
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 2:27 PM
so interesting and provocative! I can see the whole story but then again i was both an archer and a forbidden love. Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Damn right with this one. Excellent!
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Nice senryu, but you want "course" in lieu of "coarse" in the first line.
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