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T-Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance Le France 8/7/23

We cannot calm the turbulence in the open sky. We must bear with its disharmony as it passes us by ~Quote by poet Tempestuous moods erupt within, a tumultuous severe agitation Brings forth undulating vibrations, exploding with a pounding pulsation Retributions unholy, big blue-sky echoes with conflicting resound When the balefully coarse maligning words mercilessly expound Somedays gliding my way high through a stream of consciousness Taken back by the waves soaring low to a destiny that seems endless My soul, wrenched and wretched, lets loose from my clutching mind Over the ocean, tempest-tossed above knotty seas less than kind Excuse if you will my slashing unabiding, dismissive demeanor Never shall I find where tides gently flow, and grass that is greener Clashing and clawing through dark gathering clouds are my fate Exit you my friend from my world and my presence before it’s too late

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2023 2:10:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ... excellen poem :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2023 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

Jay Narain

Date: 8/10/2023 9:40:00 AM

I though turbulence in air is known as CAT. This poem brings other interpretations of turbulence, Scientifically and emotionally sound poem. Great winner.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/10/2023 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Jay!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/8/2023 3:18:00 PM

And my wife wants me to go to Korea with her. Ugh! I'll use your poem as ammunition. I don't fly well. Nicely done Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 3:27:00 PM

Lol. Go you'll be fine ~Gypsy woman and psychic ;D

Tom Woody
Date: 8/8/2023 3:19:00 PM

Though I see your poem on second read has more to do with relationships. I'm not that deep.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/8/2023 10:09:00 AM

A lot of turbulence going on here Anaya, but expressed through a poets eyes, you bring another dimension to the tumult, never a dull moment each line dramatically penned, and a hair raising warning at the end, I’m outta here lol! Brilliant cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 12:25:00 PM

Lol'z I needed that! I know me, I go from one extreme to the other and soul-searching for the balance -is still a factor in my little life. You, David are never a dull moment, Thank you for the compliment & visit.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/8/2023 9:12:00 AM

Wonderful poetry Anaya, disharmony disturbs the peace, we must do our best to make it cease, always before it’s time to sleep… Belle

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/9/2023 10:16:00 PM

Let us not make waves. Yours is a great quote Belle.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 12:28:00 PM

Belle a lot to wrap your head around, isn't it. Racing thoughts? I too, a deep thinker and still soul-searching! xhugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/7/2023 2:36:00 PM

this is so sensitive and deep, always seek for ocean or green, thanks for the beautiful poem

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/7/2023 2:56:00 PM

Yann, I thought of the word turbulence right away and was very excited about the contest. Thank you for the kind words and your visit I appreciate it, my friend. ;)