Turbulence

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T-Words Poetry Contest  Sponsored by Constance Le France   8/7/23

We cannot calm the turbulence in the open sky.
We must bear with its disharmony as it passes us by ~Quote by poet

Tempestuous moods erupt within, a tumultuous severe agitation
Brings forth undulating vibrations, exploding with a pounding pulsation
Retributions unholy, big blue-sky echoes with conflicting resound
When the balefully coarse maligning words mercilessly expound
Somedays gliding my way high through a stream of consciousness
Taken back by the waves soaring low to a destiny that seems endless
My soul, wrenched and wretched, lets loose from my clutching mind
Over the ocean, tempest-tossed above knotty seas less than kind
Excuse if you will my slashing unabiding, dismissive demeanor
Never shall I find where tides gently flow, and grass that is greener
Clashing and clawing through dark gathering clouds are my fate
Exit you my friend from my world and my presence before it’s too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/11/2023 2:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win ... excellen poem :) - hugs
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Date: 8/10/2023 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/10/2023 9:40:00 AM
I though turbulence in air is known as CAT. This poem brings other interpretations of turbulence, Scientifically and emotionally sound poem. Great winner.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/10/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Jay!
Date: 8/8/2023 3:18:00 PM
And my wife wants me to go to Korea with her. Ugh! I'll use your poem as ammunition. I don't fly well. Nicely done Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 3:27:00 PM
Lol. Go you'll be fine ~Gypsy woman and psychic ;D
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/8/2023 3:19:00 PM
Though I see your poem on second read has more to do with relationships. I'm not that deep.
Date: 8/8/2023 10:09:00 AM
A lot of turbulence going on here Anaya, but expressed through a poets eyes, you bring another dimension to the tumult, never a dull moment each line dramatically penned, and a hair raising warning at the end, I’m outta here lol! Brilliant cheers David
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 12:25:00 PM
Lol'z I needed that! I know me, I go from one extreme to the other and soul-searching for the balance -is still a factor in my little life. You, David are never a dull moment, Thank you for the compliment & visit.
Date: 8/8/2023 9:12:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Anaya, disharmony disturbs the peace, we must do our best to make it cease, always before it’s time to sleep… Belle
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/9/2023 10:16:00 PM
Let us not make waves. Yours is a great quote Belle.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2023 12:28:00 PM
Belle a lot to wrap your head around, isn't it. Racing thoughts? I too, a deep thinker and still soul-searching! xhugs
Date: 8/7/2023 2:36:00 PM
this is so sensitive and deep, always seek for ocean or green, thanks for the beautiful poem
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/7/2023 2:56:00 PM
Yann, I thought of the word turbulence right away and was very excited about the contest. Thank you for the kind words and your visit I appreciate it, my friend. ;)
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