Turbulance

We were flying high through the cirrus sky
Tomorrow’s in sight a perfect bull’s eye 
All our plans in place, a future stellar 
It’s all a breeze through our planes propeller 

Vertical clouds adrenalized my heart 
Something big was forming off the air chart 
My co-pilot said I shouldn’t be alarmed 
She explained we will surely be unharmed 

Trust is lost as our plane starts to shudder 
I see lies fly in over the rudder 
Did she misread or trying to mislead 
The result could be dire and both may bleed 

Our love landed on lies and was a crash
Love scars led to a future with backlash 

		or for the romantics

Our love landed on trust and was no crash
Our trust gave us a love life fun filled cache

-Dec 2016-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/16/2017 3:02:00 PM
My recent love landed with a thud. So I opt for the first James.
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Just James
Date: 1/18/2017 12:37:00 AM
ouch...thanks for the visit my friend
Date: 12/29/2016 7:23:00 AM
Oh how often relationships can often lead to turbulence I'm glad you gave us two endings James! :-) Hope you had a great Christmas and my best wishes for a happy and peaceful New Year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan, Merry Christmas to you and yours as well..:)
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