Notes About The Poem

Turbid Waters

Ferality 
Brutality
Remorse

Gratification 
The gains
Illusionary 

Repression 
Sublimation 
Ego games

Specious logic
Self hypnosis 
Delusion

Web of thoughts
Gluey desire
Myriad fears 

Habit patterns 
A limitation 
Self-imposed

Fear of freedom 
Thus keeps us
Bound

20-May-2021
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May 20, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Very well penned poem with great imagery and Incredible considerations. Like tossing rocks in the water and watching the ring's form and go bigger until they faded up.
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May 20, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Thanks for your kind visit and encouragement, Lassad
Buhagiar Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Great thoughts. Like throwing a pebble in the water and watch the rings form.
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Happy you dropped by, Victor
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