Turbid Waters

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Ferality Brutality Remorse Gratification The gains Illusionary Repression Sublimation Ego games Specious logic Self hypnosis Delusion Web of thoughts Gluey desire Myriad fears Habit patterns A limitation Self-imposed Fear of freedom Thus keeps us Bound 20-May-2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/20/2021 4:27:00 PM

Very well penned poem with great imagery and Incredible considerations. Like tossing rocks in the water and watching the ring's form and go bigger until they faded up.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/20/2021 7:48:00 PM

Thanks for your kind visit and encouragement, Lassad

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/20/2021 5:58:00 AM

Great thoughts. Like throwing a pebble in the water and watch the rings form.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/20/2021 7:48:00 PM

Happy you dropped by, Victor