Tunnel Vision

Running along the sand,
Footsteps trip
Hands sunk, face plant-
Can you see the cacti?
Wind howls, and grabs me by the waist-
Throwing me against the grains-
Lips cracked, I can taste blood-
Or maybe it’s salt- 
I’m losing this battle against the desert sun
I reach the cacti-
Feels like miles away but it stands, tall and proud-
Waiting for me to prick myself
Waiting for me to give in-
I reach out my hand, the sun sizzles-
And it’s gone.
Nowhere in sight, I check my peripherals
What sort of reality is this?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. When the sand of time and place dissolves, the cacti will hopefully prick us into action. Many wishes, Kai
Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:57 PM
You have so vividly described a waking nightmare! CONGRATS on your win, Sarah! Janice
Gentry Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Congrats on your win, Sarah, with this deserving poem.
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