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Tunnel Vision

Running along the sand, Footsteps trip Hands sunk, face plant- Can you see the cacti? Wind howls, and grabs me by the waist- Throwing me against the grains- Lips cracked, I can taste blood- Or maybe it’s salt- I’m losing this battle against the desert sun I reach the cacti- Feels like miles away but it stands, tall and proud- Waiting for me to prick myself Waiting for me to give in- I reach out my hand, the sun sizzles- And it’s gone. Nowhere in sight, I check my peripherals What sort of reality is this?

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Date: 5/21/2018 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. When the sand of time and place dissolves, the cacti will hopefully prick us into action. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/20/2018 12:57:00 PM
You have so vividly described a waking nightmare! CONGRATS on your win, Sarah! Janice
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Date: 5/20/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sarah, with this deserving poem.
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