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Tunnel Vision

Shake off the blinders Shatter your shameful shackles Shape your destiny I see dreams thirst for freedom And a soul plead for release AP: 3rd place 2021 Submitted April 16, 2018 for contest TUNNEL VISION sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/18/2018 6:19:00 AM

I love the way you have encuraged us to leave self-imposed shackles behind and-to soar tward our soul dreams Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Sometimes we do need that reminder.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/17/2018 8:06:00 PM

So beautiful. I don't know what "Tanka" is -I still have much to learn- yet I can say with certainly that this poem, though abrupt, was magical :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 9:37:00 PM

Thanks, Kyle. You learn the forms one at a time. It's a long delightful (and/or delirious) process. LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2018 12:41:00 AM

I agree with Paul. This shows great creativity, Line. Off with those shackles!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 1:03:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2018 3:32:00 PM

A most creative take on this contest theme, Line...spurring those who need encouragement to make their dreams come true! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 4:06:00 PM

The first three lines sure sound didactic - as long as I follow my own advice. Thanks for your visit, Paul.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/16/2018 2:26:00 PM

a flaming page that speaks of empowerment... greeat work, line... huggs

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/16/2018 1:43:00 PM

Unchain the drive in you, unleash the craving spirit in you! A woonderfu call for freedom : heart, mind and soul! I enjoyed reading! Thank you for sharing Line Gauthier.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Most appreciated.