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Tunnel

A long train journey,on a bright summer day. Majestic mountains, adorn our pathway Engrossing scenery,the windows display, still no one cares and no one enjoys suddenly the train entered into a tunnel,to our dismay No incongruity between day and night and it's neither evening nor twilight. Trapped inside the train,nothing is bright; Darkness cloaks our sight, made us yearn for the light. Oh,at last perceived the tunnel's end there. The magical lights proliferate everywhere and put an end to all the nightmares. Learn to cherish the things round us. Now that's the lesson, the life pursues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/4/2018 9:39:00 AM
Nicely done I like the lesson my friend
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:40:00 PM
Yes, a tunnel is so strange to go through and comparing it to life, when things go dark like in a tunnel. Nicely done!!
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:37:00 AM
You captured that moment in the tunnel with a magnificent message.. words of wisdom in your metaphor on life..well done Supraja.
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Date: 6/7/2018 7:34:00 AM
Good point. Well expressed, and I love how it ends. :)
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Date: 6/6/2018 5:11:00 PM
Love how you interpret this wonderful poetry. the message is clear.
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Date: 6/6/2018 5:06:00 PM
Your message is profound and clear dearest, Supraja! Thank you for sharing my friend! God bless you!
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Date: 6/6/2018 12:32:00 PM
Life itself is a blessing which we often take for granted. You are very wise to be so young, Supraja. Wonderful to read you again:)
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Date: 6/6/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you for taking me on this metaphorical train journey, Supraja! It is only when we miss something that we realize its value! As you aptly say: Lets "learn to cherish the things round us." Regards // paul
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Date: 6/6/2018 8:55:00 AM
Wonderfully penned Supraja :) xomo
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Date: 6/6/2018 7:44:00 AM
Well expressed Supraja..
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