Shadow Hamilton Poet Light Verse

Tunefully

Tunefully

                   
                                 notes cry out             singing to me

                melodiously haunting                        ringing crystal clear
        
         perfect sharps resound                                 semi-tones rend through the air

             quavers hover in the air                       so very many sounds
  
                                  join together              mingling,  blending
                                                  
                   
                                                      Joyfully

                   
                                  I sing along                  music carrying

                      me to paradise                                 sounds so sweet

     flutes playing high notes                                           drums bang out the beat 

                harps, oh the harps                                  angelic notes float

                                     rift the air                    celestially majestic
 
                                                    Enchanting 

written 08/10/2013

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Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2013 at 3:47 PM well done Linda... congrats...PD Shadow Hamilton September 5, 2013 at 4:43 PM hi Linda ty so much ty Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2013 at 1:09 PM Congrats on your great musical winning work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 1, 2013 at 2:13 PM dear Shadow. BIG congrats. I remember yours. All the ones that stood out for me, I am seeing them as I go through the winners' list. Congrats again. Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:38 PM hi Andrea I ty for kind remarks and your time in reading Shadow x smiles

Sandra Adams August 31, 2013 at 8:55 PM great job with this one...congrats on your win :) Shadow Hamilton September 2, 2013 at 2:40 PM Sandra hi ntcu again Ty very much Shadow x smiles

Danesh Morgan August 11, 2013 at 7:02 PM Music to my ears, and soothing to my soul, thank you Shadow Linda. . . Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:12 PM hi Danesh and ty music is important in life Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Carrie Richards August 11, 2013 at 6:53 PM Enchanting indeed........the verse as well as the layout! This should do well in the contest !! Best of luck !! Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 6:59 PM hi Carrie and ty most encouraging I wasn't sure about layout Shadow x smiles

Len Gasun August 11, 2013 at 6:45 PM My heart sings with joy upon reading this one my dear friend Shadow. Perfect theme and layout/shape together. A winner for me. Good luck always and thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:03 PM hi Liam anything you are not sure of just e-mail via soup and if I can would be glad to help. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:01 PM hi Leonora you make me very happy ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Liam Mcdaid August 11, 2013 at 5:24 PM a very beautiful piece linda sorry I am not sure how to operate this site at the moment have a beautiful evening Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:04 PM hi Liam anything you are not sure of just e-mail via soup and if I can would be glad to help. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Karen Anglesey August 11, 2013 at 1:19 PM You have created a musical masterpiece that floated through my ears today. Beautiful sounds on paper. Wow Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:06 PM so kind of you Karen ty for enjoying and reading it hi Liam anything you are not sure of just e-mail via soup and if I can would be glad to help. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Asokumar Panangad August 11, 2013 at 6:26 AM Truely musical, I like the arrangements, rarely tuned. well Shadow Hamilton Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:07 PM hi Asokum Ty enjoyed doing it glad you liked it hi Liam anything you are not sure of just e-mail via soup and if I can would be glad to help. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2013 at 1:57 AM hey you made a very interesting shape with your free verse style. VERY nicely done. Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:09 PM hi Andrea Tnx dear hope you enjoyed your W/E and glad you like the shape took ages to do lol . hi Liam anything you are not sure of just e-mail via soup and if I can would be glad to help. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles