Tuneful Bird Duo

Blue sky seagull chirp,
pealing  plaintive strain oe’r tides,
weeping waters rush

Cherry dew song thrush,
weaves mirthful mist from spruce tree,
off-key forest fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 2:21 AM
I felt it as i read " weeping waters rush" and also how youv written "weaves mirthful mist from spruce tree" the vividness of imagery youv painted so smoothly left me in awe, seeing through your haiku! Absolutely loved reading this dear Howard, sending you light always ~
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 2:56 AM
I’m deeply honoured by your detailed descriptive review, Ink. Your approval gladdens my day and encourages me. Light and care to you. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 11:25 PM
Loved the cherry dew line and blue sky seagull chirp. Two wonderful birds to represent with haiku
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 12:15 AM
I cherish those two kind observations, Andrea.. Thank you. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 4:57 AM
I love the call of seagulls. Such a graceful bird. I am not seen a thrush that I know about. I looked up American Thrush and yes I have seen them or at least some of them as bluebirds and robins are of the thrush family. I enjoyed reading this one, Howard. Way to go. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 5:19 AM
I am delighted you enjoyed it, Sara. I’m also grateful for your detailed research on the thrush family. H
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