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Tummy Town

Been having trouble in Tummy Town lately Probably nothing serious, just age, I'm eighty The body wears out At eighty or thereabouts But made it this far with a body quite shapely

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/26/2016 8:22:00 AM

Sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Just a side note, you never did make it over for a visit. I do think you would enjoy my poem "Thirsty".

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/26/2016 9:13:00 AM

Sorry... here I go!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/19/2016 6:04:00 PM

My silly friend... The body doesn't wear out at eighty... And besides, Grandapa Troll, a wise old soul... Says it doesn't wear out until at least 90!... And again, don't argue with Trolls... Giggle! So there... you'll have to stay around until 90! Or incur the wrath of Grandpapa Troll... We want to keep him a jolly old soul... Now, don't we?

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2016 8:45:00 AM

But it sure does slow down... trust me! LOL Good for another few though!!! Love and hugs my loyal friend, Jacko xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2016 11:51:00 AM

ha ha ha welcome back Jack - do drop by done a few funny limericks lately - 3 about Mr trump lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2016 8:46:00 AM

Will definitely check out your stuff dear sis! In a bit of a funk right now... love and huggs, Jacko xxx