tumid tulip's

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           her tumid tulip's 
i could not shift mine eyne's beam 
     she shamelessly share'd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Spence Sr Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Awesome~! I like the essence of the piece and the flow of the words. Great job! ~Josepg
Shango Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Jimmy, boy ... you get better like wine ... pour it on!
Gumbo Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 6:15 AM
oh how sweet and romantic! What you can do with three lines amazes me :) Great writing my friend.
Poe Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 4:06 PM
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! my favorite flower -Alley
Chircop Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 3:35 PM
who is this amazing person of yours?you speak so fond of her,she must be really something,wonderful expressed feelings for this lady-bravo---charma and thanks for inviting me to another gem -Geremiah in the bible,people who lead the simple life always make a grand impression in my heart,thanks--charma
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