Sigrid Ermine Poet Rhyme

Tulle Strewn Universe

Broth of froth fulfils its duty
Calls me forth for cleansing
Seaside summons with her beauty
Sordid sins, my drama mending

Tickled toes consume her tulle
Shell gems of replenishment 
Roll readily, her threaded spool
Thighs swarmed by her punishment 

Then she tugs me, draws me down
Fuelled with force which drives the world
Turgid topaz, dispatched waves drown
Sorrow in her salty spray, solacious swirl

Fuzz of ripped tulle rings in my eardrums
Ocean submerged, my private universe
Fizz of gripped torso invites redemption 
Crystal next day newness she serves





                11th September 2020 

     My Private Universe Poetry Contest 
                 Sponsor : Julia Ward

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Ann Gilmour October 5, 2020 at 3:33 PM Sending you so many congratulations Sigrid on your first place win with this incredible imagery of the sea ~ such wonderful descriptions. I too adore the sea being a Piscean, and enjoyed your most inventive style of describing her ~ wonderful! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Sigrid Ermine October 6, 2020 at 12:44 AM Such a beautiful comment. Thank you, Anne!

Sam Kauffman October 5, 2020 at 3:10 PM Vivid images and verbs that brought me right into the waves, Sigrid! The tulle is a wonderful image for seafoam. Congratulations on your first place win! This is so creative. Sigrid Ermine October 6, 2020 at 12:50 AM Thank you, sweetie. It's very kind of you to stop in. Appreciate your care and commenting.

John Watt October 5, 2020 at 12:01 PM Sigrid, I'm befizzled and befuzzled by your wonderful talents applied to the theme of private universe. Being a fan of the sea AND of your writing, this was a double joy. Big congrats on your first place win, no easy task! ~ John Sigrid Ermine October 6, 2020 at 12:49 AM Fizz and fuzz, that's right!! Thanks, John... You're very dear

Gershon Wolf October 4, 2020 at 6:38 PM I was trying to figure out how best to respond to this one when I first read it. So now I have been spared the trouble: Congratulations on your top win in Julia's contest! Way to go Sigrid! Cheers, Gershon Sigrid Ermine October 6, 2020 at 12:48 AM Yes, this write was a Kitchen bench 'quickie' before running out the door. - just happened Contest was listed then, as I was intending to write this, as previous poem written depicted a woman in psychological need, imagining the ocean to 'escape' mentally, next poem was going to be her physically going to the sea!

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 1:30 PM Congratulations Sigrid! Linda Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 3:28 PM Thank you, Linda

Newton Ranaweera October 4, 2020 at 11:03 AM Congratulations, Sigrid, on your Top Win for your excellent poetic piece!! Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 3:27 PM Thank you. It's very dear of you, Newton.

William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2020 at 9:37 AM Such an honor, Sigrid, to win 1st Place with Julia who is meticulous and have a stringent methodology in her assessments. Congrats indeed, Aloha! William Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 3:26 PM Aloha, William...! So sweet of you to drop by... I am very surprised by it.... Thank you!!

Julia Ward October 4, 2020 at 3:16 AM This deserves a wide readership, for sure! Well done for your first place win in my contest, Sigrid. Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 4:38 AM Thank you so much, Julia. Unexpected news! A cool and broad topic, so really glad to have been in it.

Susan Woodrow September 13, 2020 at 8:25 PM oh so lovely...I have been slammed in the surf...not nice but it renews the awe :) Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 4:37 AM Again, a very late response her, Susan. Thank you for very much for stopping in