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Tulle Strewn Universe

Broth of froth fulfils its duty Calls me forth for cleansing Seaside summons with her beauty Sordid sins, my drama mending Tickled toes consume her tulle Shell gems of replenishment Roll readily, her threaded spool Thighs swarmed by her punishment Then she tugs me, draws me down Fuelled with force which drives the world Turgid topaz, dispatched waves drown Sorrow in her salty spray, solacious swirl Fuzz of ripped tulle rings in my eardrums Ocean submerged, my private universe Fizz of gripped torso invites redemption Crystal next day newness she serves 11th September 2020 My Private Universe Poetry Contest Sponsor : Julia Ward

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/5/2020 3:33:00 PM

Sending you so many congratulations Sigrid on your first place win with this incredible imagery of the sea ~ such wonderful descriptions. I too adore the sea being a Piscean, and enjoyed your most inventive style of describing her ~ wonderful! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/6/2020 12:44:00 AM

Such a beautiful comment. Thank you, Anne!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/5/2020 3:10:00 PM

Vivid images and verbs that brought me right into the waves, Sigrid! The tulle is a wonderful image for seafoam. Congratulations on your first place win! This is so creative.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/6/2020 12:50:00 AM

Thank you, sweetie. It's very kind of you to stop in. Appreciate your care and commenting.

John Watt

Date: 10/5/2020 12:01:00 PM

Sigrid, I'm befizzled and befuzzled by your wonderful talents applied to the theme of private universe. Being a fan of the sea AND of your writing, this was a double joy. Big congrats on your first place win, no easy task! ~ John

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/6/2020 12:49:00 AM

Fizz and fuzz, that's right!! Thanks, John... You're very dear

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/4/2020 6:38:00 PM

I was trying to figure out how best to respond to this one when I first read it. So now I have been spared the trouble: Congratulations on your top win in Julia's contest! Way to go Sigrid! Cheers, Gershon

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/6/2020 12:48:00 AM

Yes, this write was a Kitchen bench 'quickie' before running out the door. - just happened Contest was listed then, as I was intending to write this, as previous poem written depicted a woman in psychological need, imagining the ocean to 'escape' mentally, next poem was going to be her physically going to the sea!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/4/2020 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations Sigrid! Linda

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/4/2020 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Linda

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/4/2020 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Sigrid, on your Top Win for your excellent poetic piece!!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/4/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you. It's very dear of you, Newton.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/4/2020 9:37:00 AM

Such an honor, Sigrid, to win 1st Place with Julia who is meticulous and have a stringent methodology in her assessments. Congrats indeed, Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/4/2020 3:26:00 PM

Aloha, William...! So sweet of you to drop by... I am very surprised by it.... Thank you!!

Julia Ward

Date: 10/4/2020 3:16:00 AM

This deserves a wide readership, for sure! Well done for your first place win in my contest, Sigrid.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/4/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Julia. Unexpected news! A cool and broad topic, so really glad to have been in it.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/13/2020 8:25:00 PM

oh so lovely...I have been slammed in the surf...not nice but it renews the awe :)

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/4/2020 4:37:00 AM

Again, a very late response her, Susan. Thank you for very much for stopping in