Tulips

---------remember haiku is for nature only ~ nature also has heart tulips are tulips then come yellow daffodils they dance in the wind in the early spring~ they spring to life tulips and daffodils ~ colors rife in petals' splendor ~ their love unfurls then one fades ~ other just follows 6/6/2023 a monoku, haiku, and 4 lines of rhyme contest sponsored by: tania kitchin

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Josehf Murchison

Date: 6/11/2023 10:58:00 AM

Nice I see why you marked it as other since it is two forms. Well done.

Jay Narain
Date: 6/11/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thanks

Valsa George

Date: 6/7/2023 8:46:00 PM

Both Tulips and Daffodiles are beautiful flowers that announce the arrival of spring. Enjoyed your lovely haiku and rhyme combination. All the Best in the contest, dear friend.

Jay Narain
Date: 6/11/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thanks

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2023 12:25:00 PM

Jay, your intense and insightful poem with vivid imagery reminds us that haiku is solely meant for nature. It also highlights the fact that nature, too, possesses a heart. Good luck with the contest.

Jay Narain
Date: 6/6/2023 12:52:00 PM

Thsnk you