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Tulip the Fairy

The primrose droops, with Tulip’s pout, breath-holding shade of midnight blue. The fairy-wail - a waterspout. The primrose droops with Tulip’s pout. Intent tantrum - her tears devout. Doused floral skirt with bloom askew. The primrose droops, with Tulip’s pout, breath-holding shade of midnight blue. 1/26/2022 Caren Krutsinger’s Triolet Contest

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Date: 3/8/2022 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Have a great/blessed day......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2022 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 3/8/2022 3:46:00 AM
Primrose drooping, with tulips' pout - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2022 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 1/27/2022 5:53:00 PM
I do like your word play. Your tulip fairy is sweet…pout and all. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, SuZ!
Date: 1/27/2022 5:00:00 PM
Kim, Great imagery. Enjoyed. Blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Date: 1/27/2022 6:26:00 AM
Kim, your Triolet is filled with beautiful metaphors and has a wonderful flowing. Blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 1/27/2022 5:09:00 AM
Awesome! Much enjoyed your articulation, Kim invoking splendid colors and images.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I hope Caren likes it! :)
Date: 1/26/2022 11:11:00 PM
Lovely triolet, Kim, Great imagery too. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 3:59:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Date: 1/26/2022 10:34:00 PM
Great imagery in your Triolet, Kim, it has a great flow. Blesssings my friend for a new year
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2022 3:59:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! :)

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