Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

Tulip the Fairy

The primrose droops, with Tulip’s pout,
breath-holding shade of midnight blue.
The fairy-wail    -    a waterspout.
The primrose droops with Tulip’s pout.
Intent tantrum  -  her tears devout.
Doused floral skirt with bloom askew.
The primrose droops, with Tulip’s pout,
breath-holding shade of midnight blue.

1/26/2022
Caren Krutsinger’s Triolet Contest

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Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2022 at 8:21 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Have a great/blessed day...................... Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2022 at 11:00 AM Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex March 8, 2022 at 3:46 AM Primrose drooping, with tulips' pout - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2022 at 5:00 AM Thank you, Christuraj!

Suzanne Delaney January 27, 2022 at 5:53 PM I do like your word play. Your tulip fairy is sweet…pout and all. SuZ Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 6:47 PM Thank you, SuZ!

Debra L Brown January 27, 2022 at 5:00 PM Kim, Great imagery. Enjoyed. Blessings Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 6:47 PM Thank you, Debra!

Sotto Poet January 27, 2022 at 6:26 AM Kim, your Triolet is filled with beautiful metaphors and has a wonderful flowing. Blessings Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 7:34 AM Thank you, Lasaad!

Vijay Pandit January 27, 2022 at 5:09 AM Awesome! Much enjoyed your articulation, Kim invoking splendid colors and images. Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 6:11 AM Thank you, Vijay! I hope Caren likes it! :)

Victor Buhagiar January 26, 2022 at 11:11 PM Lovely triolet, Kim, Great imagery too. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 3:59 AM Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs

Eve Roper January 26, 2022 at 10:34 PM Great imagery in your Triolet, Kim, it has a great flow. Blesssings my friend for a new year Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2022 at 3:59 AM Thank you, Eve! :)