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Tugging On Heart Strings

This verse might bite, straight into some hearts Hack open tough sternums, pull rib cages apart Anaesthesia's unnecessary, wouldn't do any good It ain't bypass surgery, I'll be keeping the blood Yeah a mission of mercy, an operation to save face Your fate has been chosen, not here touching base I'm searching for strings, inside your heart valves For this vampire flosses, and scared of root canal Something Spooky 8 to 16 lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 12/10/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/25/2021 12:04:00 PM

Delightfully creative David! Whimsical spooky! Congratulations on your win. So fun to see this on the winners list. Cheers!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/25/2021 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Sam, I kept it whimsy and light on purpose, I was in good form when writing, enjoying making it up as I went along, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/24/2021 2:36:00 PM

David, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem, loved that it was both spooky and humorous!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/24/2021 3:04:00 PM

Heya Tania, thank you so much for the placement, I got great enjoyment writing this one for your contest, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2021 12:55:00 PM

thanks for the smile David, this was such a clever poem:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/24/2021 12:59:00 PM

Yeah that vampire is a big wuss when it comes to keeping his fangs away from the dentist chair, thanks Jan for looking in, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/18/2021 11:52:00 AM

I'll be keeping the blood.. Love this line It's bite's Sir

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/18/2021 12:00:00 PM

A fun write Christopher with a vampiric twist