Tug of War

Driven mad by all this pulling- Tearing me limb from limb! Who do you think you are fooling? Ah, this feeling- great and grim! Grieving Goddess fits the bodice, And embodies my Despair. At this Tug of War- am no novice... (Oh! All the Hurt I can't repair!)

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Skat A

Date: 2/12/2014 4:08:00 PM

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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/17/2014 11:57:00 AM

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/13/2013 6:38:00 PM

I know this tug of war, all to well. You are so great at expressing your feelings. Nice work, Chan! Love it! :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/15/2013 9:06:00 AM

Thanks, Kel! <3 :)

Robin Davis

Date: 11/8/2013 7:14:00 PM

Chan my friend This is a very emotional and sad poem, that pulled at my heart. That's not nice you bad boy. HEE HEE Thanks for the sweet comment on my Pieced Me Together poem. HEY !!! Do I need to tell your sweetie he doesn't complete you. LOL Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:46:00 AM

Thanks as always for stopping by and for the read and reply, Sweet Pea! <3

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2013 2:41:00 PM

Tnks for stopping by my humble verses Chan..This is a profound poem indeed.Some hurt We can t indeed repair ..But for every rose there is a thorn..and for every rose there are petals everywhere.May you be blissed by their perdume.Only time will heal the pain.I love the way you are able to express your emotions.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Charm; very much appreciated :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/6/2013 9:41:00 AM

Cleverly expressed.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/6/2013 12:48:00 PM

Thanks, Richard :)