Tuckered and Tucked In-dodoitsu string

tuckered and tucked in with him
ebb and flow of pillow head
personalities have dreams
we walk on the sea

we see no sun, with eyes shut
lily pads and no frog legs
and the sky’s a blinding blue
our feet toss and turn

pebbles rise into the clouds
a curious sight, indeed
even in the darkest night
distressing whale song 

whistle salts breeze into face
we walk our separate ways
sleepy fits of temperament
hopeful peppermint

a couple buoys apart
harbor of port and starboard
ahoy, matey…don’t walk plank
drop splash to the deck

wakey…wakey…the seas wake
the blasting siren alarm
no one cares less where wave crests
it rests on the bed

that is the crumpled bed sheet
only need to straighten it
a boat left in the harbor
the sea’s now placid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 5:49 AM
- Sounds like a nightmare and you wake up sweating with the sheet around your neck... a great imaginative journey, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 10:36 AM
lol…thanks
Hind Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 8:08 PM
This seems like the end of something. It's beautiful with so many lines I like "even in the darkest night distressing whale song" "a couple buoys apart" "no one cares less where wave crests" always your work touches me inside. <3 dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
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