Tucked Safely Away

Bought a little gun today
                       Then tucked it safely away
                    
                     Younger brother found it soon
                   Organs screaming and limbs strewn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:18 PM
In just a few lines, the message is loud and clear. Well done, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thanks, Line. ---Exactly what I had hoped to achieve: Just to describe what's happening; no politics or agendas. Just a statement, loud and clear. Best wishes, :) gw
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