Tucked Into Bed

eyes shut as books close
the gray-moon peeks through the blinds
— boys dream in color

7/30/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Such a beautiful haiku, Kim. Amazing! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:13 PM
'gray moon peeks through blinds," beautiful image!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Thank you, Michelle! Hugs...Kim
Rigoler Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Very good. When I was in college s a young man the belief among "dream experts" was that no human dreamt in color! I dream in color most of the time. Who are those "dream experts"? So much for higher education. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:07 PM
They are jealous;) Thanks, Maurice!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Wonderful haiku! :) xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
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