Tucked Into Bed

eyes shut as books close the gray-moon peeks through the blinds — boys dream in color 7/30/2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/31/2018 5:29:00 PM

Such a beautiful haiku, Kim. Amazing! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/31/2018 2:13:00 PM

'gray moon peeks through blinds," beautiful image!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! Hugs...Kim

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/31/2018 1:47:00 PM

Very good. When I was in college s a young man the belief among "dream experts" was that no human dreamt in color! I dream in color most of the time. Who are those "dream experts"? So much for higher education. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 6:07:00 PM

They are jealous;) Thanks, Maurice!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/30/2018 9:54:00 PM

Wonderful haiku! :) xomo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen!