Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Tu Requerdo Your Memory

Tu Requerdo  

Tus ojos se me clavan en mi mente,
y tu requerdo no lo puedo olvidar.

Porque te atravesaste en mi camino?
Porque no te seguiste? Porque me 
conociste?

Veniste a mi y me enamoraste, y luego
me dejaste. Aveses pienso que fue un sueno,
que nunca me quisiste, porque nunca exististe.

Aun tu requerdo lo llevo aqui en mi mente y
muy dentro de mi corazon. Tu imagen la llevo 
en mi mente bien grabada, que por mas que 
trato, no la puedo borrar....


Your Memory

Your eyes are stuck in my mind and your memory,
I can't forget.

Why did you have to cross my path? Why didn't you 
just keep on walking? Why did you have to meet me?

You came to my life and seduced me and then you left
me. Sometimes I think - it was only a dream, that you
never really loved me, because you never really existed.

Your memory I will take with me, in my mind and very
deep in my heart. Your image has  been engraved very
deep in my mind, that as much as I tried - it can not be 
erased... 

06/13/2014
By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2014 at 9:34 AM My friend, this is a gem for me. You just have this unique talent of skillfully putting it all together in a beautiful way. They say love is indelible and leaves its mark on your heart forever. So even after we have moved on, in some ways it is still with us. I hope you are doing well! Hugs. Pandita Lucilla Carrillo June 30, 2014 at 10:22 AM Thank you Pandita for reading. Love does leave a mark forever.

Justin Bordner June 17, 2014 at 2:17 PM I know this beautiful burden too Lucilla, keeping vigil for a saddened heart. A weight so very heavy, yet too precious to leave behind. I love the smoothe genuine feeling in this poem my friend. I wish that I could hear you read this to me, in both languages. This is a FAV. J.A.B. Lucilla Carrillo June 30, 2014 at 10:28 AM Thank you Justin for liking my poem. He was my daughter's father.

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2014 at 11:26 PM thank you for the comment on my comment. PD

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2014 at 10:33 PM Well Done Lucy, Linda Lucilla Carrillo June 16, 2014 at 10:46 PM Thank you Linda. This things will happen as long as there people in love.

Carolyn Devonshire June 16, 2014 at 5:19 PM Dear Lucilla, I have met some men like the one you describe here. The "love 'em and leave 'em" types are hard to identify at first. That's why I try to take things slowly. Men don't understand that, but I can see you do. Friendship has to come first for me - then other things come more naturally. Well penned! Love, Carolyn Lucilla Carrillo June 16, 2014 at 10:11 PM Yes Carolyn; You are right. When we are young and in love - we don't see their defects. I only have one daughter . He was her father. I learned after that, not to trust.

Ravi Sathasivam June 15, 2014 at 2:43 AM Excellent romantic poem. Enjoyed. Tfs Lucilla Carrillo June 15, 2014 at 2:55 AM Thank you so much Ravi.

Ken Carroll June 14, 2014 at 10:51 PM Precioso escritura y desde el corazón .. Lucilla Carrillo June 15, 2014 at 2:54 AM Que Bueno que te gusto Ken. Gracias

Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2014 at 12:04 PM - My Spanish is bad .... but, heartbreakingly beautiful in English, dear friend Lucilla. - You are really skilled ...... maybe you write in Norwegian, too ? :)? :)? :)? - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:37 PM Thank Annelise for the nice comment, but no - I can not write Norwegian. I wish I could.

Ralph Sergi June 14, 2014 at 9:18 AM Hi Lucllla: A beautiful poem in Spanish of lost love. "Las palabras de amor en la poesia nunca se olvidan." Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 11:57 AM Gracias Ralph, que Bueno que te gusto este humilde poema. Many bessings...

Len Gasun June 14, 2014 at 5:16 AM This is a very lovely heartfelt poem my dear friend Lucy. When I was reading the Spanish, I understood a little but not all. Thanks for the awesome English translation poem. Thank u, thank u so much for this gem. Thanks a lot as well for your nice comments on my poem dedicated to my dad. Yah, happy happy Fathers Day to all fathers there. God bless. love lots and big hugs, Leonora Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:22 AM Thank you Leonora, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Harry Horsman June 14, 2014 at 4:37 AM beautiful, poetry at it's best...just love this.... Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:21 AM Thank you Harry, Glad you stopped by.

Tim Smith June 13, 2014 at 11:47 PM How very beautiful Lucilla....hugs Tim Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:18 AM I'm glad you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2014 at 10:45 PM me gusta mucho leer tu poema primera vez en espanol. Entendi casi todo!!! MUY BIEN. Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:17 AM Thank you Andrea, every now and then I will let you practice your Spanish.

Arthur Vaso June 13, 2014 at 9:08 PM What a lovely romantic poem, after the wine, I saw this poem twice!!!! :) Lucilla Carrillo June 14, 2014 at 7:15 AM Thank you Arthur, I hope you understand the whole thing.