Tsunami Times

When hard times rain down
on our loved ones; when trials
need to be endured-
they seem to come all at once.
Wouldn’t you agree?
I’d say this year I’ve been hit
not just with a flood -
but rather a tsunami.
First gray clouds gathered.
Then a huge wave rushed forth on
our sweet safety shore -
covering my family.
Oh how I deplore
my own painful conditions.
Others seem to have
burdens of the feeling kind.
Around me I see
those swallowed by tsunamis
not just of grief but
coupled with physical pain.
How aren’t those burdens
more than they can even bear?
One day I will know
the answers to my questions.
I’ll be where only
peace and joy flood over us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 8/18/2023 1:16:00 PM
Andrea, you use the metaphor and images of the tsunami so effectively masterfully crafting them into your choka with such emotional impact that ends in a beautiful statement of faith and trust! I have a feeling this will be on the winners list! Sending you continued prayers and hugs with hopes that your rainy season will move on and let the sun shine again!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2023 5:24:00 PM
Thanks but I kind of figured it would not be a win
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2023 5:24:00 PM
Thanks for the prayers
Date: 8/8/2023 9:47:00 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading this one about how we can be overcome with problems but in the end we will more than survive. Got to go put together a pop-up pie. Sara
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Date: 8/7/2023 2:31:00 PM
physical pain, can be unbearable, take care, walk away yann
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/10/2023 1:28:00 PM
would certainly walk away if I could!
Date: 8/7/2023 11:43:00 AM
sorry you've had a rough go of it, andrea! i can certainly relate. it always seems so unfair to me that some people are hit so much harder than others with pain and suffering, but that's life, i suppose. your poem is excellent...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2023 4:09:00 PM
thanks so much, Ilene. My hubbie and I are going to look into oxygen beds for healing therapy. I keep trying different things. haha. Too bad the stuff covered by insurance doesn't work either.
Date: 8/7/2023 11:30:00 AM
As we overcome pain and suffering from natural disasters, we hope and pray, people will come out stronger than before.
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Date: 8/7/2023 10:39:00 AM
I know this is quite personal for you, so it makes me sad. Suffering proliferates and will only get worse for a time, but I believe strongly in this future promise: Revelation 21:4
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