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Tsunami Tides of Sorrow

She doesn't want to seem weak, But she so desperately craves the blade. She's been stressed, sad, overwhelmed and depressed, And she's tired of her facade. She wishes she could cry, But instead, She feels emptiness and overwhelming sadness. It's like a tsunami tide of sorrow, And she just can't escape it.

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Emile Pinet

Date: 5/2/2017 2:23:00 PM

You have painted a picture with words that inspire, educate, sadden and captivate the reader. Your pain and frustration are dragged from the shadows and laid out for all to see, touch, smell and witness. Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Emile #7

Darci Hopkins
Date: 5/3/2017 9:39:00 AM

Emile Pinet, thank you so much. I've always struggled, thinking, am i a good enough poet? will readers ever want more? the encouragement here has been amazing. thank you so much. <3 ~you are beautiful

Darren White

Date: 5/2/2017 10:34:00 AM

This is a difficult thing, to do, and to conquer. I know what you are talking about. But I want to give you hope that you can get there, in the meantime write your poetry, because you write well :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Darci Hopkins
Date: 5/2/2017 1:13:00 PM

thank you so much. you have no idea how much that means to me <3 ~you are beautiful