Tsunami Sickness

sea draws back a breath shore disappears out of view spewing forth its puke By David kavanagh

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/14/2021 9:13:00 AM

Your haikus are superb. The wit + intelligence startle. Delightful reads always. Poetry's muse is with you. Best wishes Brian

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 9:36:00 AM

Thanks Brian this particular one is a hard hitter, forgive the pun, got an N/A in contest as well, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 1/11/2021 2:02:00 PM

very vivid imagery, many congrats on your win David;-) hugs Jan xx soupmail

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/11/2021 2:46:00 PM

Thanks Jan, it is a brutally honest irreverent description of them killer tsunamis, purposely used crude language to describe my distaste, cheers David