T-Shirts and Blue Jeans

Black band t shirts
And faded blue jeans
Combined to clothed creativity
In a child who silently screams
Isolated and introverted youth
Cynicism constantly growing
Dark moments and blue bruises
Covered by the logo showing

Mind numbing frailties
and paralyzing self-doubt
His world is ten feet of shadow
His idols help him speak out
Vicariously living through artists
Empowered by lyrics of truth
Clenching expeditiously to music
Blasting headphones wipe out his youth

Chaotic reality, psychotic dreaming,
Numbed by bottles over the years
A passionate poet sleeps within him
Blank pages are the ears of his peers
Yet the ears of society are his target
An abundance of epic collections
He will not leave every pondered piece
Only the greatest of his finest selections

To be treasured or trashed?
Is his struggle shared by the masses?
Will his words synchronize his generation
Or become a mere fad which passes?
Questions to be answered by the future
Yet his idols have taught him to dream
For if not today, tomorrow will bear,
Children of band t shirts and blue jeans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 31, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Audonos, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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December 28, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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December 27, 2010 at 7:15 PM
This site made a good choice in its selection of this poem. It has pervasive descriptiveness and impressive rhyming.
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Audonus. Love, Carol
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December 26, 2010 at 9:13 PM
Congrats Audonus on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...
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December 26, 2010 at 5:02 PM
This took me back to a place I've been before and all the pain and emotion that went with it. I've lived this poem and I think you portrayed things quite vividly. It's deep and dark and real. I like your work.
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October 29, 2010 at 7:33 PM
your poem and words are remarkable. Audonus, your poem is a treasure of our future thoughts. Enjoyed the wipe out epic session of our clothed creativity. who really knows what tomorrow will bring, but for now i found myself a new favorite poet on the soup, hope your not just passing bye, here.. By the way i'm still running with the girl crowd of this generation wearing denim jeans... with t-shirts.. later,...p.d.
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 4:04 PM
I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Audonus. Love, Carol
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