David Smalling Poet Free verse

Tsetse-Bumba

Touched with the feelings of man's infirmity
Before we came, deity by another name
Made ill by loneliness, for without socialability
Nothing is perfect, your love did proclaim
And love you purged you, made you vomit
And sun and moon and stars danced out of it
And earth wingless came, sprayed from it
And nine living creatures crawled around in it.
And the loneliness went away, and you the first
Big One filling yourself before you made the sky
By love reversed the sickness of the universe
And became God when creatures crowd your eye
And you Tsetse-Bumba
The friendly
Andyou Tsetse-Bumba 
The respectful
And you Tsetse-Bumba
From the vomit
Exalted humanity,
The finite, to dwell in eternity,
 And Nyonye-Ngana was there
And Chonganda was there
And Chedi-Bumba was there
And loneliness again was no where.

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L'Nass Shango November 10, 2010 at 5:33 AM David, I am reading this as an African chant, or a spiritual incantation, am I right? Are you invoking an orisha? How does this agrees with your Christian faith? Even more beautiful is the rhyme and rhythm here, I feel the drum beat with sudden changes, or gaps ... perhaps interventions ... tell me about all this my friend

Sylvia Coulstock October 21, 2010 at 5:24 PM Hi David I see you are from Jamaica and Though not familiar with your traditions and culture I really loved this.I felt the spiritualityand your love for Tsetse-Bumba.Each country or religion has its' own story of the creation and the worship of God each beautiful and none more so than your own,You have laid it out in such a moving way and have opened up my own spirituallity, which is no matter how different we may appear to be what unites us all.Thank you. luv June(Sylvia)