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tryst with a digital twist

Can threesomes avoid apoplexy?
To have more than one might be sexy
He was amused
When his asks were confused
By the "girls" in the room called Alexi

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Hilda Greenhough

February 5, 2024 at 6:59 PM

Those machines that you talk to, and they talk back, are not for me. Also, there may be more than three, because they can be hacked. Poem is good, and has an inferred warning.

Duke Beaufort

February 6, 2024 at 11:53 AM

Yes thanks Hilda. The things that happen become stranger and stranger.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 5, 2024 at 6:45 PM

Dear Duke, Your poem is a clever and humorous exploration of the complexities and ambiguities of modern relationships in the digital age. The playfulness and the unexpected twist is great. The question you pose about threesomes avoiding apoplexy is both thought-provoking and whimsical, setting the tone for the witty journey that follows. The interaction with the “girls” add a delightful twist, highlighting the humorous mishaps that can occur in the realm of online encounters. - Daniel

Duke Beaufort

February 6, 2024 at 5:36 PM

Daniel, you are indeed an accomplished philosopher and profound. There is a lot to read in words and I guess that can apply to a few short lines. I get a lot of joy reading some of the complex thoughts you describe. It is a little more work to read something longer, but in your case well worth the effort. And yes...relationships can get complicated if we get selfish.

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