Tryst or trust often its bust

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I wrote fhis late last night as i was tired, so i just went back to it to remove Some of the hunan imput..' Well i'll never clear it all will I.? This write reflects On some experiences peculiar to me 'in trusting others' despite God telling Me (you will be let down in this!) O K Father you were right again so i put This down..I know a pastor who will say.' I would rather offend people by Telling them 'how it is' than pat their back..' as the go toward hell.' Funny how others teachings stay with you in the Lord.' May God bless all Readers.!
Take the plunge..As I have before, try your friends..
Just to be sure.' Give them truth..Support' some trust
Then wait and see.' Expecting no love, or hate..that fire.'
For it might flare? Their will exposed, in steeped despair?
Who knows the spirit of humans? Deep to core? but one.!
The Great I Am, within deep seas we can't escape him
He's traced each wrinkle, none can berate Him.' And
So I turn to my only Father, who has warned me often 
 I had allowed for rather..? Well a different speil or option'
Did it depend in part how i'd spun the wheel.? God is
True let all others be liars' add the crackle of thorns to
To call those before Him called..?  God watches 'all people' 
And
Maybe, wonders?
At much stupidity as yet; he stokes hells fire.'

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Date: 3/11/2024 1:00:00 PM
Smart way to live Joe, good one!
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Date: 3/9/2024 10:03:00 AM
Such trying times,Joe. Will humanity stay on this hampster- wheel forever. Take care my friend. SuZ
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Date: 3/9/2024 11:19:00 AM
Only while on earth I guess Suz' It used to be 'you could choose Not to be put on it.' Yet the inhumanisam is pushing against any free actions.' In this Write I address Hell at the end Yet its not just about that its about the true reality while we Are here.' Some People make The right noises but don't seem To work through it.' Oh well.)
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