Tryst

Sultry San Francisco September dazed in the heat of a moment, flown by too quickly this time when they moved together was over too soon. But, she stretches with a smile as he goes.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 11/17/2008 12:33:00 PM

Sue, this was one of my favorites. You should have placed. So much here that wasn't said that made it all too awesome. And that stretch, so perfect. Well, subjective and all that. Just wanted you to know I was surprised, and also wanted you to know how much I love it! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/31/2008 3:02:00 PM

Those were the days my friend! I wasn't a secret agent but I was under covers a lot. Bet he was smiling too. Vince

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/22/2008 3:45:00 AM

Awesome nonet, I love that stretch of sunlight. love Kristin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/21/2008 6:19:00 PM

I am sorry Sue. Thanks for the welcome comments on my work. I always enjoy your writes.

Adell Foster

Date: 10/21/2008 4:52:00 PM

Sue, this is a great Nonet in form imagery and flow, I truly enjoyed the read. Good luck with the contest. God's Love, Always, Adell

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/21/2008 6:01:00 AM

Hmm...very visual. Love that stretch and smile. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/20/2008 6:30:00 PM

Good riddance. I love this piece and how she stretched when he left. Good picture.