Trying To Update Alice

A revised version of Alice was up for grabs in the clutches of my mind.
With a wizened worldly white rabbit, drinking mushroom tea of a new kind.
I began plotting and scheming a plot that would flabbergast, awe and bind.
The others editors had no imagination, so I finally said “Oh, never mind!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 12:30 PM
A very cute write. Watch out when you are drinking. Never can tell what it is. Have a blessed day.....................
Krutsinger Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 11:10 AM
I am careful with my drinks, believe me!
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