Trying To Love You Forever

I am trying to love you forever 
I am trying to love you forever 
Like the sun and moon 
Like a mothers love 
I am trying to love you forever 
I am trying to love you forever 
Like the tide, constant in and out 
The relief of spring 
I am trying to love you forever 
give me the chance to try it out 
give me space to take the first step 
but stay close to catch me when I fall. 
I am trying to love you forever 
but you lie blank 
unresponsive 
uncaring 
unloving 
emotional coma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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