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TRYING TO LOVE

My love, Just trying to talk with you, This love is old not new. Waiting for your message, But everyday becomes wastage. When you enters, My mind windows closes, And my heart always surrenders, And my feelings explodes. But you ignores, Then I feel so lonely, And you finish it before, But my love is for you only. And will remain forever. Only yours, Meetkumar Tailor

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Date: 12/24/2020 12:26:00 PM
The second stanza is the best of the piece. I personally would not have used "wastage" in any piece of poetry, it's such an ugly word. Your sentiments shone through, even though the piece was brief.
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MEETKUMAR TAILOR
Date: 1/6/2021 5:09:00 AM
Oh yes thanks.