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Trying To Let Go

I had it all wrong
all I do is play along
nobody understands me
I'm in another galaxy
I say this literally
it's empty laterally
I haven't found my soul group
everything is out of loop
I wish I knew this a long time ago
it would have saved me from this low
We all recognize what saying proceeds with that
I must save it for a personal chat
knee slapping that is
let's all have a quiz
I'm tired of fighting internally
it needs to stop eternally
my foe
trying to let go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/16/2020 10:43:00 AM
"Life is constant change and revision of all that one thinks one knows" and attitude still makes all the difference! The world is still your to enjoy! Aloha! Rico
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/16/2020 5:07:00 AM
Introspection is always good---one sees the light emerging.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 12/16/2020 3:09:00 AM
You're being too hard on yourself, Angela. It's impossible to get things right all the time. ~ Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. My husband and my best friend tell me that all the time.
Date: 12/16/2020 1:25:00 AM
I hope this is fiction. It's not good not to feel a modicum of peace in oneself. Accept all and be happy, ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. I try :)

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