trying to lend a hand

everyone In town tries to lend a hand
but few hands are welcome
because grief is a private emotion
you have to go through it alone
they still try
being small town people
who want everyone to feel good

She decides to camouflage her emotions
until they return to their homes
this takes every ounce of her energy
but the refocus helps her in some ways
grief is a debilitating feeling
it takes a lot out of people
today it took her to the mat
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Hello Caren, yes grief takews a lot out of a person that is suffering from it. It took me 3 years to get over my grief when my husband died. We go through it alone. In order to heal. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Hello Caren, I think you are right about the grief. it took me 3 years to grief over my husband. now I am okay and moved on. Some people get over grief quickly some do not. It depends on the person. Hugs. /Darlene/
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December 3, 2025 at 10:38 PM
I do not think we ever get completely rid of grief Darlene, it is so horrible
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