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Trying To Grasp the Wind

Trying To Grasp The wind. . My hearts long for desiring Mat never transpire to be But dwells in within The very deepest part of me For what I want is like the sweetest tasty apple Always there so close yet out of my reach For I am hungry for love And without the lavish feast . I often wonder what did I do wrong My natural urges beyond my control And so ever strong To never see my first born Look up and smile at me Is like a dagger I feel so painfully But never see . To never have a love so strong As a loving sweetheart Almost seems a sin I’m trying to reach for the impossible But foolishly Trying to grasp the wind. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Akkina Downing

Date: 12/14/2020 9:46:00 PM

Everyone deserves to be loved and indulged in the sweetness of love. Keep your heart open always for she might just sneak in and stay... Best wishes, my friend :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/14/2020 4:17:00 PM

so near and yet so far..being alone can be difficult, but you never know what might be round the corner...(in my case a load of trouble usually lol) x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/14/2020 3:50:00 PM

P O W E R F U L!!! Love it. God bless you

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/14/2020 8:55:00 AM

Hello Peter dome, Peter one day you will find that special someone that is meant for you, sharing a wonderful life together. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2020 3:50:00 PM

Hello Peter, well oka you know where to find me if you want to talk. Enjoy your evening my friend. x

Peter Dome
Date: 12/14/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Darlene. I'll be ok. take care. x Much appreciated. Stay sage.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2020 10:10:00 AM

Peter do you want to chat on the Soup Mail? I was just wondering. Let me know. Thank you. If you do look up my name.

Peter Dome
Date: 12/14/2020 9:22:00 AM

Hi Darlene. Hope you are right. I wasn't meant to be so alone .Take good care my friend.

Peter Dome
Date: 12/14/2020 9:19:00 AM

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/14/2020 8:37:00 AM

Hi Peter, I hope that one day you will experience the love that you desire to have. You deserve it be because you're an incredible human being. Enjoy the rest of your day, my friend-Alexis

Peter Dome
Date: 12/14/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you My dear friend Alexis. I tried. What a wonderful thing to say, likewise my friend take care.