Trying It Again After Mind Progression
my soul is so light right now
while sharing a cookie shake with you
at first you gave me the strangest of looks
you felt the embrace of my enthusiasm
then you opened your mind
your shield is so dissipated right now
as i check out the latest lyrics to your latest song
at first i roll my eyes thinking you were the latest comedienne
i felt the sincere enticement of your passion
then i opened my eyes
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