Trying
there’s darkness all around me
so thick that I can’t see
all my life means nothing
I can’t take it being me
I take some pills
but you stop me
I try again
and you commit me
I hide a knife from the nurse
and hoping she doesn’t see
what I’m about to do
please let me be
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