Try Me

My breaking point 
has been reached
one wrong look is
gonna end in bloodshed
I'm a ticking time bomb
come test me 
I'll leave you in pieces
believe me this
when it comes down to
you or me 
we both already know the answer
so step up or step off
because I would love to
destroy you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 21, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Hi Richard, I like this awesome write. Congrats, on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT~
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July 21, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Richard, , Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA
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July 18, 2013 at 7:55 PM
This made me giggle. I have felt this way MANY times. Great job!
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September 20, 2011 at 9:57 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Richard. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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