Try

If you can't succeed by trying
you should try again denying,
as your second time in trying
means you're never meant denying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Hello Trevor McLeod, this poem makes a lot of sense. If you do not succeed try,try, again. a good motto. It is nice to meet you. have anice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 2:20 PM
There is nothing wrong with this poem. If you feel you must do more with this poem then do so, i like it the way it is. Happy Easter. have a nice day my friend.
Mcleod Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Darlene. I was actually trying to say more. I was trying to say that sometimes trying the same thing has different outcome. You've got me wanting to rewrite this now. LOL Thanks for that. I'll see if I can come up with something. Trevor
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