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Truth To Be Told

She ran fast and far, across wooded lands, deserts, east to west. Trying her hardest to out run the pain and problems at best It failed in brewing sand storms while the culprit remained inside There was no place for her to run, there was no place to hide She had to sit on barren land and face the depth of what she knew Decide to work at healing the open wounds before they grew Because without looking within, she would not be able to see The buds to her blooming dreams waiting, with any clarity So, she stopped in her choice to take the most difficult road yet The road of truth to be told that would leave her without regret Heidi sands 8/23/17

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Date: 9/21/2017 10:31:00 AM
I hope she finds that road of truth...Most likely it's where the culprit is...Enjoyed it...Have a nice day Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2017 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Arturo. Your comment means a lot to me :)
Date: 8/24/2017 6:29:00 PM
Truth wins out each time it is firmly held steadfastly sought.. Please keep you blooming dreams well watered with more poetry and gifted inspirations. A fav...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 6:33:00 PM
Thank Robert. Ok. I will. I am happy to hear it is a favorite and appreciate your comment on this! :)
Date: 8/24/2017 1:37:00 PM
poetry filled with wisdom such as this poem can only come from the learned lessons from a life lived...well-done poet
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 3:26:00 PM
That's right Frederic. A lot of lessons learned. Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/24/2017 11:19:00 AM
A very deep and thought provoking poem, Heidi. There is something to said of facing one's fears. Great truth poetry, my dear friend. Beautiful from end to beginning. An instant fave, sho' nuff. Love and smiles.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Freddie! :)
Date: 8/24/2017 10:14:00 AM
It is difficult to face what ails us Heidi. Be strong and remember you are not alone.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 10:22:00 AM
Yes Tim, it is a challenge to face what ails us, but we must in order to live authentically. Thank you for your kind message about not being alone. I will stay strong. Take care :)
Date: 8/24/2017 9:29:00 AM
The bold truth...nicely written my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, WW! :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:59:00 AM
Wow! There are seeds of truth in this one. Nice work Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Dean ! :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:19:00 AM
Very profound poem dear, Heidi! One ought to meditate on its content!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 9:37:00 AM
Hi Demetrios. Thank you :)
Date: 8/24/2017 7:30:00 AM
The pain within, so well illustrated--with an uplifting message of truth to be told--good work, Heidi!
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Date: 8/24/2017 7:39:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Nice to hear from you with such a nice comment this morning. Thank you :)
Date: 8/24/2017 6:50:00 AM
Truth nurtured 'the buds of her blooming dreams'....Very nicely penned Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph! :)
Date: 8/24/2017 4:26:00 AM
Your poem flows eloquent in my lung, and brings the pain that encompass it to my sense. You composed it excellently.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Afolabi! I appreciate your comment :) Have a nice day.

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