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Truth of Obscurity

I don’t need to be told what I’ve seen
whether it’s real or a sinister scheme
I need a world where I know the rules 
which we call wise which we call fools

Where the lines in the sand are a lot less hazy
and people agree on who people call crazy
But the lines in the sand have gone every which way
from the truth of obscurity growing each day

We’re a nation of leaders who’ve lost their way 
where all are consumed of crescendoing fray
skulking in darkness on weakness we prey
leaving in question what’s lighting our way

This dreariness some are beginning to feel
the mental fatigue of discerning what’s real
Confusion and chaos have run us aground
far from the winds in our sails we had found

I don’t need to be told what I’ve seen 
but I fear what I’ve found that remains of the scene 
folks with no compass no maps and no guide
colliding in wastelands of deepest divide

Where is the ground upon which we can stand
steady behind the lines drawn in the sand?
For what shall we fight still united as one?
For what shall we die when it’s all said and done?

~Jeannie Cronin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Well thought and done! Confusion is so rife, many Americans believe a six-time bankrupt - and habitual liar - who has launched 60-lawsuits - all of which were dismissed for lack of merit - should lead them into the future. Our grandchildren deserve better than that! Aloha!
Cronin Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 2:17 PM
Can I get an AMEN!!!
Kyser Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 8:49 PM
Across all of time, only one worthy man Keep eyes fixed on him and follow his plan :-)
Cronin Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 10:30 PM
Thanks for the comment, Jeff. Read some of your work, love the bee poem, Bellamy the Bumblebee approved!
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