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Truth Decay

The day he moved in he started packing all of her away. She barely even noticed her personal truth decay. Her mirror reflected shadowed eyes, echoed her quiet dismay. Without a breath in her defense she was a captured castaway. She barely even noticed her personal truth decay. Naively she didn't stand as he kept her friends at bay. Without a breath in her defense she was a captured castaway. The home that she had filled with dreams disappeared when she disobeyed. Naively she didn't stand as he kept her friends at bay. Her mirror reflected shadowed eyes, echoed her quiet dismay. The home that she had filled with dreams disappeared when she disobeyed. The day he moved in he started packing all of her away. Ruby Honeytip © 2013

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Date: 7/4/2013 3:43:00 PM
Moving!... Terry
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Ruby Honeytip
Date: 7/5/2013 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Terry :^)
Date: 7/4/2013 10:13:00 AM
wow, this is amazing. I have read at least 40 poems today and this is the best one. A FAVE.
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Ruby Honeytip
Date: 7/4/2013 2:20:00 PM
Gee Thanks Andrea! I truly appreciate your words :-D
Date: 7/3/2013 5:39:00 PM
This is a really wonderful poem. You did a great job!
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Ruby Honeytip
Date: 7/4/2013 2:21:00 PM
Thank you April :-)

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