Truth Be Told

lovers
happy,warm
hiding, rushing, explaining
hotels, motels, cars, rooms
wanting, needing,cursing
cold, empty
enemies


contest Diamante
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:54 PM
A great diamante, Frederic! So sad when the love comes to an end...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 2:14 PM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:15 PM
oh how soon this kind of love turns into nothingness. Congrats on your win. this was a great one.
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:58 AM
another feather on your cap, frederick.. congrats!
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:50 AM
God has brought me through Dave to know you and you have justified that God does not make mistake; it has been since then wonderful work from you and I must confess that you have added music to my life; congrats Frederic for this excellent work.
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:25 AM
- A really wonderful diamond, Frederic !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 3:42 PM
many congrats Frederic:-) hugs jan x
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:59 PM
wow, I LOVE how you did yours. You chose an excellent theme!!
Callus Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Lovely way to tackle this form, as if crossing a bridge from the friendly side to the enemy side. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:45 AM
great transition from lovers to enemies, creating a beautiful picture that comes to a wonderful conclusion, frederick..
A. Sharma Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Frederic this is truly wonderful. Gl in contest!
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 5:59 AM
- Love your "little diamond", Frederic - Well done - Luck in contest!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:49 AM
great take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x
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