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Truth Be Told

lovers happy,warm hiding, rushing, explaining hotels, motels, cars, rooms wanting, needing,cursing cold, empty enemies contest Diamante

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/23/2014 8:54:00 PM

A great diamante, Frederic! So sad when the love comes to an end...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2014 2:14:00 PM

I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 11:15:00 PM

oh how soon this kind of love turns into nothingness. Congrats on your win. this was a great one.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/18/2014 10:58:00 AM

another feather on your cap, frederick.. congrats!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/18/2014 10:50:00 AM

God has brought me through Dave to know you and you have justified that God does not make mistake; it has been since then wonderful work from you and I must confess that you have added music to my life; congrats Frederic for this excellent work.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 12:25:00 AM

- A really wonderful diamond, Frederic !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2014 3:42:00 PM

many congrats Frederic:-) hugs jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2014 3:59:00 PM

wow, I LOVE how you did yours. You chose an excellent theme!!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2014 12:24:00 PM

Lovely way to tackle this form, as if crossing a bridge from the friendly side to the enemy side. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2014 6:45:00 AM

great transition from lovers to enemies, creating a beautiful picture that comes to a wonderful conclusion, frederick..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/9/2014 10:49:00 AM

Frederic this is truly wonderful. Gl in contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2014 5:59:00 AM

- Love your "little diamond", Frederic - Well done - Luck in contest!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2014 3:49:00 AM

great take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x