Truth

Pure gold does not fear the flame , It's really easy to say tham, But how to identify the veritable, The truth has different forms, Sometimes hidden sometimes calm. i want to know the truth and, you want to know the truth , no body able to say the truth . there is castle of lies, how to catch the one, but don't worry , know about gods game, pure gold does not fear the flame.

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Shubham Kamble

Date: 7/7/2017 1:15:00 PM

Very True!! A good writing.. best wishes in your continued writing.. :) shubham

Shreastha Vyas
Date: 7/8/2017 1:32:00 AM

Thanks Shubham,continue connect with me,motivate me.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/6/2017 1:37:00 PM

Shreastha, wherever the heart leads you the words will follow. Truth is in your words, don't stop sharing them...My very best wishes, Charlie

Shreastha Vyas
Date: 7/7/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for good wishes,and motivation.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/1/2017 5:45:00 PM

The truth is like gold and like gold it is very hard for humans to find but even if they find it one day they will not recognize it! A good writing my friend! Do not give up poetry keep working on it whenever your heart and mind desires! Good luck!

Shreastha Vyas
Date: 7/2/2017 8:28:00 AM

Thank you so much sir,please support me for improvement.