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Trusting

do not be anxious
do not fret
God is in control

He will never leave
you alone
He is always near

though dark days may come
trust in Him
He is your refuge

call on Jesus' name
He will save
He will light your way

6/19/15
This form is a Lune - a 3 line poem with syllable count of 5/3/5
I was inspired to try this form after seeing a poem written by 
Dorian Petersen Potter posted here on soup.

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2015

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Darlene Gifford Date: 7/2/2015 9:33:00 AM Hi, Kim, I liked your Lune poem and you could not have picked a better subject to write about. Praise Him!...I think I'll try and write one myself. You learned this form from another poet, and now you are passing it on to others like me. And I will pass it on to someone else. (Pass it on) and help others learn is a good motto for poets to have. Blessings, ~~~Darlene Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/3/2015 10:19:00 AM Thank you, Darlene! I appreciate your encouragement and enthusiasm. Blessings to you.

Emile Pinet Date: 6/20/2015 1:50:00 PM Your faith in God shines brightly throughout your poem. Emile. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 6/20/2015 8:29:00 PM Thank you, Emile!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/19/2015 9:03:00 PM ok, just read this lune of yours. A nice little form for this poem. So great that you got inspired by a fellow Souper. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 6/20/2015 8:28:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/19/2015 9:02:00 PM Kim, I was finally able to edit that cat poem I posted . If you care to take another look, I think you will understand a lot better now what I was doing!! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 6/19/2015 9:01:00 PM Kim, this is a well written piece. The message of God being in control speaks loud and clear. Nice form as well. Great job! :) Alexis Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 6/20/2015 8:28:00 PM Thank you, Alexis! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!