Trust Me, It's a Good Thing
New life takes hold, filling the void
Bringing on a numb feeling, good
Liking what this does, how it feels
The water warm and inviting, friendly
Foreign objects clutter the empty space
Tonight this feeling takes on a better meaning
Tonight the feeling is beneficial
Tonight the feeling is mutual
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