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We’ve stopped to park, and it’s no big surprise you’ve quickly scooted over to my side. What’s coming next is easy to surmise; your roaming fingers to my bra strap slide. I move your hands away. At age sixteen, it’s not my first time in a young man’s car. I understand what all the signals mean, but you must know this can’t go very far! Your kisses are not too bad, I admit, but lacking in finesse, too speedily, You try to take things farther. Then a fit you throw. Does this show me that you love me? Just take me home, for I’ve heard plenty of such tripe as “Trust me baby this is love.” July 12, 2017

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Date: 7/26/2017 12:08:00 PM
Great one Andrea! :)
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:15:00 PM
Love this the teenage love can be very provoking. Great writings God bless.
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Date: 7/22/2017 1:19:00 PM
I can no longer read comments about a poem where the poem itself is located. Curtis.
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Date: 7/22/2017 12:47:00 PM
Matthew 7:25-27 25 And the rain fell, and the floods came, and the winds blew and beat on that house, but it did not fall, because it had been founded on the rock. 26 And everyone who hears these words of mine and does not do them will be like a foolish man who built his house on the sand. 27 And the rain fell, and the floods came, and the winds blew and beat against that house, and it fell, and great was the fall of it.”
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Date: 7/22/2017 12:43:00 PM
Hi Andrea. This is fantastic. I have a granddaughter who's 16, and I'm praying she's as wise and devoted as you were. Thanks for your kind comments. Curtis
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Date: 7/18/2017 6:40:00 PM
I love the picture. :) And you can't blame the guy and you can't blame the girl. :) Whattaya gonna do? :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 6:05:00 AM
Hmm, not love, but lust, well written, Andrea:)
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Date: 7/16/2017 8:58:00 AM
I was being sarcastic lol, thats teen boys for you, only after one thing..
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:09:00 PM
I've broken the guy rule concerning girls in my family, I've told them all when they became teenagers that between 13 and 25 all guys lie if you like red they'll like red if you like music they'll like music, they can't help themselves it's just nature...conquest is what drives them...I know I was one of those guys...glad you made it through those times
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Date: 7/15/2017 5:42:00 PM
What a great write Andrea great storytelling nicely done.
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Date: 7/15/2017 4:39:00 PM
Great work sis.
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Date: 7/15/2017 4:24:00 PM
Sounds like love Andrea, lovely sonnet..
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Date: 7/15/2017 6:15:00 PM
Does it really?
Date: 7/15/2017 9:16:00 AM
Oh yeah, the old play at first base. Sometimes safe, sometimes out. What games we played...memories. Well done Andrea.
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:16:00 AM
A clever theme for the contest Andrea... Great write...Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/14/2017 12:18:00 PM
I am convinced all my teen boyfriends left me because I would not allow them to open my brassiere. It's truly laughable now when I think of my 32A's.
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:49:00 AM
Intriguing title, excellent words.
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Date: 7/14/2017 3:09:00 AM
Haha Andrea. I love your take on the contest. The picture is a real treasure too! : )
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Date: 7/13/2017 8:45:00 PM
Andrea......Trust me baby....this is poetry! My best, chuck
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Date: 7/13/2017 6:10:00 PM
I like where you took the prompt, Andrea - good storytelling.
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Date: 7/13/2017 10:44:00 AM
Ahh...the memories...best of luck Andrea...great write...^WW^
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:27:00 PM
He tried to put the moves on you :-)...Nicely penned Andrea...GL in the contest..
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:15:00 PM
Well you were right. I have been to lover's lanes myself and maybe the best women were the ones who said no. I streamed in A Quiet Passion on the computer for free which you might want to do. I like Emily Dickinson's poetry - especially the line "hope is the thing with feathers" - I think that is the gist of that poem. I liked Wonder Woman as it shows a heroine - like Golda Meir or Joan of Arc.
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:25:00 PM
Ha! I love the picture with your words. It is perfect! Your poem reminds me of younger years :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thanks for the trip down memory lane or should I say lover's lane:) How old were you when you started dating? Oh well, this is a very fun read and i wish you the best:)
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Date: 7/12/2017 7:52:00 PM
lol ... tripe ... very cool ... ha ha ... yeah ... as far as where this write was going and how you ended it like this made this reader smile ... really like your choice of words and just the over alls of this piece ... hey ... Thanks for sharing your thought flowers. ...
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